general essay 2

Description
There are 3 annotated bibliographies located in the essay. Those need to be well paraphrased. No need to Change structure but fully paraphrase ( don’t reduce the word) cite it clearly in the paper. There are some comments on the essay below the paper. read it as well and make the paper better

The essay is completed by others. I just need someone paraphrase it explicity

There are 3 annotated bibliographies with their references on the top ,

Paraphrase and correct