Revising an essay with comment

I have an essay written and ready. My instructor asked me to revise this essay and I am going to post the instructor’s comments. I will also upload 2 articles that needed in writing this essay.

Comparative Rhetorical Analysis Essay (Fall 2019)CriteriaRatingsPts

Title & Introduction

20 pts

Full Marks

Title is appropriate and original Introduction includes a hook/attention-grabber. Context regarding the topic of graphic novels/comic books is provided. Both authors are introduced and sources are summarized. Thesis answers the Key Question and is highlighted yellow.

0 pts

No Marks

Comments

13 / 20 pts

Organization

30 pts

Full Marks

Body paragraphs have a clear topic. Body paragraphs discuss both authors. Body paragraphs progress in a logical order.

0 pts

No Marks

Comments

24 / 30 pts

Support & Integration of Sources

30 pts

Full Marks

Adequate evidence is used from both articles to support points. Paraphrase and quotation are used effectively.

0 pts

No Marks

Comments

20 / 30 pts

Rhetorical Analysis & Evaluation of Sources

60 pts

Full Marks

Comparison of rhetorical moves each author makes is effective. Analysis of rhetorical moves is clear and in-depth. Discussion of strengths and weaknesses of each text included. Evaluation of which article is more effective is clear. Personal opinions regarding topic are avoided.

0 pts

No Marks

Comments

40 / 60 pts

Conclusion

20 pts

Full Marks

Restates thesis and summarizes key points. Ends with a global statement about significance of analysis.

0 pts

No Marks

Comments

15 / 20 pts

Grammar, Highlighting, & MLA Format

40 pts

Full Marks

Grammar: There are few errors, and none that interfere with meaning. Highlighting: Thesis is highlighted yellow; topic sentences are highlighted green; body paragraph topics (one word or phrase) are in bold. [See student samples for more help with this annotation system.] MLA Formatting: Document is properly MLA formatted.

0 pts

No Marks

38 / 40 pts

Total Points: 150

case study – Evie.ai: The rise of artificial intelligence, and the future of work

I need someone to check my project and complete the last point.

Attached below is the rubric of the project and my work that needs to be checked the report should not exceed more than 2500 worlds and 5 references should be from the library.

This is the feedback of the first section (1-1.4) of the report i correct some points i need someone to recheck my work and complete the other points:

1) Use consistent font and font size. The second page in Table of Contents should begin with 1. Overview.

2) Do not use pronouns e.g. we, our, I etc. in business report writing. Write in neutral form.

3) There are problems with the use of the English language. Issues with grammar, and sentence construction that lead to fuzzy meanings need fixing. Furthermore, you do not begin a sentence with a small letter.

4) You wrote: “Certain specialists, quite Nilsson (1980), accept that AI could be critical to our comprehension of man-made reasoning. ” What does this sentence mean?

5) I do not see in text citations. Why?

For example, you wrote: “The global artificial intelligence (AI) in the retail market earns $720.0 million in 2018 and is predicted that CAGR (compound annual growth rate) will reach 35.4% during 2019-2024 (forecast period).” Obviously, the figures come from an article.

6) In Development of Tech Companies section – Explain more about the development of AI in just 2-3 companies only. You do not need to mention so many companies but you say nothing about their development of AI i.e. what are currently being undertaken about AI ?

7) In Definitions and Examples section, I do not see exactly the definitions. Throughout the section you describe examples.

8) References lack journal articles. Moreover, the one that seems to show a journal article does not have complete citation and follow correct APA citation: Daewon Lee, Jong Hyuk P. Future Trends of AI-Based Smart Systems and Services: Challenges, Opportunities, and Solutions. (2019). Journal of Information Processing Systems; , 717–723. doi: 10.3745/JIPS.02.0113

Content Analysis Strategy, law homework help

For this discussion, select a current criminal justice or crime-related topic in your professional area of interest (Probation Officer that has been the focus of news articles. Then respond to the following in your main post:

  1. Propose a content analysis strategy for this topic using newspaper articles or editorials as your units of analysis.
  2. Draft a problem statement for your selected topic.
  3. Identify your key independent and dependent variables.
  4. Define the population selection of the units of analysis, a sampling plan, and coding procedures for your key variables. You may use an article on this topic as the basis for developing your coding procedures test.

Organ Transplants, law assignment help

There are many contemporary issues in corrections that are topics of ongoing debates in fields of penology, criminology, and corrections administration. Some of the cases regarding these issues have made it to the Supreme Court, whereas others have not. In this assignment, the members of your group will research the following issues in corrections today and provide information on the viewpoints from the different sides of the debate. The issues are as follows:

  • Organ transplants

For your assigned contemporary corrections issue, answer the following questions:

  • What court cases involved this issue?
  • What were the decisions of the lower courts?
  • Did any of the cases make it to the Supreme Court?
    • If so, what was the Supreme Court decision?
    • If not, is the case still active? Explain.
  • What is the general opinion that society seems to have with regard to this issue?
  • Have any organizations opposed to the court decisions made progress with regard to prisoners’ rights?
  • How do you foresee the outcome of the debate regarding the issue?

3-5 pages as well as references

Disaster Backup/Disaster Recovery, management homework help

This research paper will describe,
compare and contrast Database Backup & Disaster Planning.  This
research paper must be submitted using SafeAssign.

  • This paper will be 5 pages total:  (a) Describe Database Backup – 2
    pages, (b) Describe Disaster Planning – 2 pages, (c) Highlight the
    importance of the integration of both backups and disaster planning and
    the impact if both are not effectively executed – 1 page
  • APA format; minimum of 4 professional/peer review references. Note:
    professional references refer to books and journals.  Typical internet
    resources are not considered professional resources)
  • You must open the ‘3rd Research Paper – Data Backup/Disaster Planning’ located above to attach/submit your finished document.

Researcing the Immigration policy at the federal, state, or local level and evaluate potential solutions to the problem.

PADM 6650: Public Policy Analysis Public Policy Analysis Paper Guidelines

This Paper is Researching the immigration Policy.

I have attached a file of my short paper and the professors remarks.

Please add more to the logic model and it must be included.

I have provided books as references and I need more journal articles.

Students will research an existing public policy at the federal, state, or local level and evaluate potential solutions to the problem. The paper will be at least 15 pages in length (double-spaced, Times New Roman) with a minimum of 15 sources.

In their paper, students need to address the following:

  •  Describe the specific government policy that is the focus of the study, includingits statutory authority (or legal case if appropriate), the specific agency charged with the responsibility for implementing the policy, and the source and amount of funding that supports the policy
  •  Define the problem the policy was designed to address including its scale and scope
  •  Describe the policy, economic, and social environment in which the problem arose and the policy was developed
  •  Describe the impact of the policy on the problem as it is experienced in our local area
  •  Describe the impact of the policy on population groups in our area that have been historically marginalized

Scoring Rubric for PADM 6650 Student: ___________________________________

Assessor: _________________________________ Date: ____________________

NASPAA Competency 2: To participate in and contribute to the policy making process.

Mission-based Student Learning Outcome: Explain, discuss, and apply clearly and accurate the key concepts and central theories, and demonstrate expertise appropriate to the discipline.

Intermediate Learning Outcome:

Given a selected policy, students will be able to analyze the political social, and economic contexts in which the policy was developed and the factors influencing the policy’s outcome.

NASPAA Competency 4: To articulate a public service perspective.

Mission-based Student Learning Outcome: Formulate and express important/essential questions and issues related to the discipline with clarity and accuracy, and appropriate depth and breadth.

Intermediate Learning Outcome: In analyzing a public policy, students will properly identify the impact of that policy on population groups that have been historically marginalized.

Assessment Method: Students are required to write a policy analysis paper that challenges them to evaluate the impact of a current policy on our local area.

Score (0-5)

NASPAA Competency

Criteria

2

Student accurately describes the specific government policy that is the focus of the study, including its statutory authority (or legal case if appropriate), the specific agency charged with the responsibility for implementing the policy, and the source and amount of funding that supports the policy

2

Student clearly defines the problem the policy was designed to address including its scale and scope

2

Students describes the policy, economic, and social environment in which the problem arose and the policy was developed

2

Students describes the impact of the policy on the problem as it is experienced in our local area

4

Students describes the impact of the policy on population groups in our area that have been historically marginalized

Final Score our of 25 points maximum

Scale: 5 completely fulfilled all requirements of the criteria

4 fulfilled the majority of the requirements but did not excel in all
3 fulfilled the requirements in an average way
2 fulfilled some requirements in an average way, but failed a few
1 made an attempt to answer the question, but failed to fulfill most of

the requirements
0 made no attempt to answer the question or completely failed

PADM 6650 Final Paper-Policy Analysis

Students will research an existing public policy at the federal, state, or local level and evaluate potential solutions to the problem. The paper will be at least 15 pages in length (double-spaced, Times New Roman) with a minimum of 15 sources.

In their paper, students need to address the following:

  • Describe the specific government policy that is the focus of the study, including its statutory authority (or legal case if appropriate), the specific agency charged with the responsibility for implementing the policy, and the source and amount of funding that supports the policy
  • Define the problem the policy was designed to address including its scale and scope
  • Describe the policy, economic, and social environment in which the problem arose and the policy was developed
  • Describe the impact of the policy on the problem as it is experienced in our local area
  • Describe the impact of the policy on population groups in our area that have been historically marginalized

Rubric for Final Public Policy Analysis Paper

Student

Checklist

Criteria

Possible Points

Points Earned

Introductory First Paragraph

Topic is clearly introduced in a specific way

3

Argumentative thesis statement

8

Outline of paper for the reader

3

Sub-Total

14

Body of Paper

Includes minimum of 15 research based sources

6

Problem is clearly established

6

Flow/Clarity: Sections, paragraphing, and transitions are clear and appropriate.

6

Course concepts and terminology cited and used throughout

6

Evaluative Criteria clearly established

6

Evaluative Criteria clearly applied to Alternatives

6

Sub-Total

36

Conclusions and Recommendations

Student thoroughly explains conclusions and implications, but does not make conclusions beyond the scope of current project

2

Student makes legitimate recommendations regarding the program studied

2

Sub-Total

4

Grammar, clarity and style

Contains no grammatical errors, no wordiness or repetition.

6

Appropriate title page: title reflects project, formatting is consistent with writer’s manual

2

Adheres to page recommendations, uses 12 point Times New Roman, no formatting errors

8

Sub-Total

16

Citations, References and Appendices

Follows APA style contains no citation errors and no missing citations.

5

Follows APA style and contains no errors in references

5

Sub-Total

10

Paper Prompts

Student accurately describes the specific government policy that is the focus of the study, including its statutory authority (or legal case if appropriate), the specific agency charged with the responsibility for implementing the policy, and the source and amount of funding that supports the policy

4

Student clearly defines the problem the policy was designed to address including its scale and scope

4

Students describes the policy, economic, and social environment in which the problem arose and the policy was developed

4

Students describes the impact of the policy on the problem as it is experienced in our local area

4

Students describes the impact of the policy on population groups in our area that have been historically marginalized

4

Sub-Total

20

Grand Total

100

Having spent the semester studying peace, what would you suggest is/are the best way(s) to pursue/attain peace?

The purpose of this assignment is to assess students’ progress throughout the course. It requires students to respond to the following question: Having spent the semester studying peace, what would you suggest is/are the best way(s) to pursue/attain peace? In answering this question, students should also briefly reflect back on the issues raised in their first writing assignment and discuss how their understanding of these issues has (or hasn’t) changed over the course of the semester. Students are required to draw from course materials (minimum of four citations). As in all written assignments, students will be evaluated based on organization/composition, understanding of course material, application of course material, effort, and mechanics/grammar.

the peace studies 2 document is the first paper which is mentioned in the instructions ( short writing 2 instructions) the other 4 documents are the articles that must the paper talk about them ( the sources ) I will upload other two articles ( you should pick 4 of the 6 articles and use them as sources )

Stratification Media Analysis, powerpoint presentation help

Select a television
program that you know contains a social inequality or social class theme
(e.g. racism, sexism, social class categories).

Include photos, illustrations, graphs, diagrams, animations, videos, or audio clips. Document the source of each media item you include.

Discuss the following in your paper or presentation:

  • Provide a brief introduction that includes the program’s title,
    describes the type of program, and explains which social theme you are
    addressing.
  • Describe and explain scenes that apply to the social theme.
  • Aside from verbal language, identify all observed body language,
    facial expressions, gestures, posture stances, modes of dress, nonverbal
    cues, symbols, and any other means by which inequalities are displayed.
  • Explain your interpretation of the meanings of the identified nonverbal communications and symbolism.
  • Summarize how these interpretations are important to the
    sociological understanding of your chosen social inequality or social
    class theme.
  • Provide a conclusion that summarizes the key points in your analysis.

Format your references
according to appropriate course level APA guidelines. Include citations
in the speaker notes or in a separate reference list.

Literature Resource Review

Successful completion of a doctoral dissertation requires significant amounts of independent reading on the research topic. This allows the doctoral learner/researcher to become familiar with the scope of the topic and to identify gaps or tensions within the existing literature on the topic. These gaps and tensions become the source of the dissertation research. In this assignment, you will read and annotate potential sources in your dissertation field of interest. Those demonstrating the most merit to the best of your understanding of the topic at this time should be added to your RefWorks list for potential inclusion in the literature review section of your dissertation.

General Requirements:

Use the following information to ensure successful completion of the assignment:

  • Locate the assignment submission for “Literature Review Resources” from your previous class. You will be adding to this document to begin or continue building a running literature review.
  • It is recommended that you engage in this activity thoughout the duration of this course.
  • Instructors will be scoring your submission based on the number of unique sources identified in the list submitted.
  • Download the “Literature Review Resources” tool and use it to complete the assignment.
  • Doctoral learners are required to use APA style for their writing assignments. The APA Style Guide is located in the Student Success Center.
  • Refer to “Preparing Annotated Bibliographies,” located in the Student Success Center, for additional guidance on completing this assignment in the appropriate style.
  • You are not required to submit this assignment to LopesWrite.

Directions:

  • Read at least 10 peer-reviewed articles in your general dissertation field that you have not read previously.
  • In the “Literature Review Resources” document that you submitted previously, provide the following for each source that you are adding to the document:
  • APA-formatted citation.
  • Brief annotation of the key points of the source.
  • Indication of whether the sources has been added to (Y) or excluded from (N) your RefWorks list.
  • Highlight the additions to the document so the instructor can readily identify them.

Discussion: Main Idea

Discussion: Main Idea

Engaged, curious reading is an essential first step toward being able to create scholarly arguments. In Discussion this week, you practice “joining the conversation” by creating an argument in response to a reading.

To prepare for this Discussion:

  • Review the materials on critical reading strategies and on the MEAL plan for paragraphs.
  • Read the provided article in the Learning Resources, taking note of where the authors make claims and support them with evidence.
  • Read actively, taking notes and asking questions. If you are a hands-on type of learner, you might find it helpful to print out the excerpt and mark it up physically; use whatever methods are most effective for you as a reader.
  • Decide what kind of argument you might make based on what you’ve read.

*********Post your initial 1- to 2-paragraph response that addresses the following:

  • What is an argument you can make about the topic based on this article? This sentence will serve as the main idea sentence in your eventual MEAL plan paragraph.
  • Explain why you have chosen this argument as a critical reader.

Resources

Rogers-Shaw, C., & Carr-Chellman, D. (2018). Developing care and socio-emotional learning in first year doctoral students: Building capacity for success. International Journal of Doctoral Studies, 13, 233–252. https://doi.org/10.28945/4064

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