two written essays i need you to fix all mistakes on it and make it clear

moodle_temp_turnitintool_1160168717._21320_1429296593_31568.doc 

moodle_temp_turnitintool_1185882487._20424_1427510040_31568.docx 

These are the two essays above!

papers requirements?

– Check the thesis.

-Grammar.

-Punctuation.

-Transition words. 

-Conclusion. 

make the two essays clear and very good for college level!