can you fix this?

Fix the paper up to flow better. the paper must follow the guidelines below. you may add more to the paper if needed.

Paper will need to have:

• Introduction or thesis statement
• Evidence/Quality of Information
• Support of your Thesis or Analysis
• Organization or the development of your thesis
• Conclusion
• Proper Grammar
  • Your grammar should be excellent, along with correct spelling, no typographical errors, proper mechanics, subject/verb usage, tense, and with no punctuation or capitalization errors.
• Citations
  • Your works cited page or bibliography should be in ASA format
  • There are many tools available online to help you with formatting your bibliography. https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/583/03/
  • http://www.citethisforme.com/us/citation-generator/asa
  • http://www.bibme.org/american-sociological-association

  A decent guideline on sources and on the basic format of the paper assignment is provided here:http://hydrodictyon.eeb.uconn.edu/eebedia/index.php/Term_Paper_Assignment