discussion 250 words about the proposal 3

Let’s use this week’s discussion as the final opportunity to receive and provide feedback on the proposal and/or professional profile.

Post a copy of your proposal and/or professional profile as an attachment–the drafts should have revisions made. With your draft(s) offer some framing/contextualization for your classmates. Then, include two questions or areas of focus for your classmates. The questions should focus on issues of clarity, conciseness, and cohesion. Where do classmates need additional clarification? Where might support for a claim be necessary? Where might document design (e.g. headings, sub-headings, etc.) strategies be useful?