ellis island essay correction 1

I wrote an essay but I need help with these 3 problems. Here is the list:

1. Your epigraphs need to go at the start of your paper. Then you explain them in your conclusion as you have done. I’m not sure if you’re still working on it, but you can use a little more explanation of the epigraphs. How do they connect to the larger ideas in your paper? Take a little time to analyze the quote as well.

2. Take some time to talk about the “how” of how we remember the past? What is the museum like? What is being memorialized and why?

3. In your introduction, you can use a thesis like statement at the end to highlight the main idea of your paper. What is the primary point you will be making about Ellis Island and how we remember the past?