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Elizabeth
then hopped into the car and did just what the note said, Elizabeth needed her
computer which was Elizabeth’s ‘most prized possession’ on that computer it had
all of her most important files on it. Elizabeth’s work documents, her vaction
photos, her family photos, her music just everything etc…  Elizabeth then shows up to the location of
where the note told her to go at.  When
she gets there she sees the black SUV with the bright beams on just like the
note said. Elizabeth gets out of her car and walks towards the black SUV with
the bright beams on and says hello I think you have something that belongs to
me. The person in the car throws a bag out of the car window and drives off
speeding fast. Elizabeth looks in the bag and there her computer lays, its
broken into tiny pieces now, Elizabeth is so upset all of her files on the
computer are gone forever but there she finds another note which was on the
outside of the bag, Ellizabeth opens it and it says “My hammer and I will see
you again real soon Beth, signed Jones” Elizabeth suddenly gets frighten and
quickly gets into her car and drives to the police station to report her ex
husband.