essay grammar correct

main job: correct the grammar problems and the sentences use. you can also according to the requirement to revise some place that you think it necessary or i missed.

here is the paper requirement:

Based on what you’ve learned in assigned readings and class lectures, describe the language situation in Hong Kong

For Hong Kong, you should consult Lau (the first file that i upload)

Your paper should summarize which languages and dialects are spoken; by whom; and in what contexts. You should also indicate the relative prestige associated with the various languages, dialects, and accents. If you are discussing Hong Kong, you will have to say something about changes in the language situation over time.