Fix an essay to a research essay, and makes it better!

1. We need to change an essay to a research essay, you must fix the essay to make it better and better.

2. This essay must be APA style and academic.

3. It should have 5 researches, which includes: quotation, paraphrase and summarize.

4. In the end their should have an reference, and there should be a in text source to support the idea.

5.There must be another 2 pages to write 2 summaries, which are in the essay.

6. The hook must change to something else instead of a question.

7. There is an outline, you can follow the structure here.

8.The essay must be 1300 -1400 words