make an adjustments in pro con paper upon instructor s feedbacks

Excellent work in this paper, especially in APA format and paragraph development. You have good initial research. I suggest adding more explanation of the research – Why is the research important? What is the significance of the research? This will help to provide more perspective of the research. Also, take a look at the paragraphs and try to create better flow from sentence to sentence using transitionary phrases. Here is a website to assist with transitions: https://writingcenter.unc.edu/tips-and-tools/trans…