personal essay draft 1st person point of view

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Topic: Monitoring Toddlers and Technology

2 Full Pages, double spaced, NO research, first person Point of view

Each body paragraph should be atleast 5 sentences.

Thesis: Monitoring toddlers and technology is important to me because they are vulnerable to online predators, there are inappropriate things children should not see, and they make accidental online purchases.

Outline:

  1. Introduction
    1. Opening
    2. Thesis statement
  2. Body
    1. Supporting point 1
      1. Evidence and explanation for point 1
      2. Evidence and explanation for point 1
    2. Supporting point 2
      1. Evidence and explanation for point 2
      2. Evidence and explanation for point 2
    3. Supporting point 3
      1. Evidence and explanation for point 3
      2. Evidence and explanation for point 3
  3. Conclusion
    1. Rephrased thesis statement
    2. Concluding thought

Body paragraphs topics:

Paragraph 1. online predators

Paragraph 2. inappropriate websites

Paragraph 3. online purchases