plagiarism check and please fix it

the tutor who helped me with this paper with serious plagiarism problem. I update the essay here. please double check to make sure there is no plagiarism. She did not quote the reference properly. please proofread the essay and open the links below to add the quote to the text properly. if you cannot find it, search online to add the quote to the text. It is a very easy work, just plagiarism check. please be aware for every words.