please see the example i just need you to correct grammar

please see the example i just need you to correct grammar and praphrase please

and see if i miss any part and paraphrase the paper please especially the red lines because it is the professor writing

and for the Overarching themes part: I think you need to add how each part related to the the course and how or why

also please change what it need to be change

I will send you examples of two different Academic Inventory.I used example2 for my paper and i will send you the instructions of the Academic Inventory

I will send you my paper that I did it called Academic Inventory 123