the walking dead TV show first season writing 2nd draft

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ENG 201 Draft 1 feedback

Length10/10

MLA style9/10

Technical proficiency7/10

Content15/20

TOTAL41/50

, this is a very promising draft, but it must be improved. First, it isn’t clear which theoretical approach you are using. Second, you are not using close reading techniques to analyze material quoted directly from the script. You need a list of Works Cited in MLA format. You will need to finish reading the script and then expand this draft. This piece can be further strengthened by cleaning up as many of the technical errors as possible. For example, you use the wrong name for the show in your opening sentence. I encourage you to use the Murphy Center to get supplemental assistance with this assignment.

MLA format
4 pages