Writing Assignment on The Child psychology beyond the school gates: Empowering foster and adoptive parents of young people in public care, who have been rejected, neglected and abused.

I have already had this writing assignment written but I want help in writing an abstract likewise my professor has mentioned some problems as : Not have enough citations in introduction, should cite the author in the first sentence since that is what I am writing about. Also, in the second paragraph, the article assessed, not it did not, the author assessed, articles are paper, they do not do things.Big error, the reference is on a page to itself, see the template.

So, I need a help one more time in writing an abstract and in solving my mistakes in the previous paper please.