writing blog i want someone to edit the blog that i have just an edit

I cannot determine if any of this is original writing. There are53 no citations or references for any of the material. Another student submitted a very similar essay on this topic.

You will have to provide a significant revision for your final version that tells me exactly on a sentence by sentence level where you are getting these ideas.

As well, you have to have to not simply describe, but provide real-world examples of how these ideas are put into practice today.

This is description of other people’s work and does not meet my expectations.