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REVISE!!!!

As Elizabeth
continued finishing up the chapters in the book she suddenly heard a loud bang
come out of nowhere, ‘bang bang bang’ It frighten Elizabeth, Elizabeth quickly
got up to see what was causing all of the loud bangs.  Elizabeth walked into the kitchen and all you
see is glass all over the floor. The bangs so was loud that it broke the
kitchen window. Elizabeth was so confused on how the window got broken and then
all of sudden Elizabeth heard her car alarm going off. Elizabeth quickly grabs
her coat and runs outside without trying to fall to stop the car alarm from
making any noise. As Elizabeth does this she notices that theres a note on the
windshield of her car which reads “I’ve
taken your most prized possession.  If you want to retrieve it, you must
meet me, tonight, in the parking lot of the Fed/Ex Football Field where the
Washington Redskins play.  Come to the large, black SUV with the bright
beams on.”