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TextBook: SeedFolks by Paul Fleischman
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TextBook: SeedFolks by Paul Fleischman
you will share a 500-word synopsis of your semester paper. This posting should be completed using APA formatting (in-text citations and references). DO NOT copy and paste your 20-page paper. The posting should be a synopsis of your research (350 words)
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WRITING ASSIGNMENTS
Fan Letter (750 word minimum)
Write a Fan Letter to a musical theatre artist and tell them why you admire them. This assignment combines research, analysis and creativity in order to give you an in-depth understanding of the contributions of one composer, lyricist, librettist, performer, choreographer or director of stage musicals.
There are some examples of past Fan Letters at: http://www.csudh.edu/bdeluca/The%20American%20Musical/Musicals.html
You are encouraged to choose an artist from the many musicals listed in our Course Outline, which will help ensure that you are choosing a Musical Theatre artist, and not just a contemporary singer or performer. After reading about your chosen artist in our text or online sources, do some basic research on their background, their other productions, and what others have written or said about their artistry. Before writing the letter, spend time analyzing their work to get to know what you feel are the reasons that make their accomplishments stand out. Some of the questions below may help you gain familiarity with their work:
If you choose a Composer: What is the quality of this composer’s music? How does the composer use Soft or Loud values (dynamics); Fast or Slow beats (Tempo); or High or Low tones (Pitch). How do these expressive qualities create an emotional mood in their work?
If … a Librettist: Are there compelling themes in the stories of this librettist’s book? Statement made by the show? Intention in writing this work? Would you classify the musical as tragedy, comedy, melodrama, farce, tragicomedy? How does the plot succeed?
Lyricist: What makes the lyrics work for the songs of this lyricist? Can you describe their lyrics as witty, simple and straightforward, poetic?
Choreographer: What made the dances work? Were they graceful and solemn? Highly paced and sensuous? How well did the choreographer shape the movements of all the dancers?
Director: Actors cast appropriately? Imaginative use of the space? Theatrical compositions of actors and settings that helped the audience see the story being told? Movement of the actors well motivated? Pace of the action effective?
Actor/Singer: Believable characterizations? Actors related to each other believably? Performers seemed spontaneous, relaxed, and natural? Easy to understand? Clear and resonant vocal qualities? Comfortable singing range? Singing tone appropriate for the character?
After completing the research and analysis, write a Fan Letter to your chosen artist and express your admiration for them. Use the following structure for the paragraphs of the letter:
Introduction: Tell him or her why you like their work (artistic style of movement, cleverness of lyrics, importance of issues, quality of musical forms, etc.). Avoid making only general descriptions of praise, and focus more on the reasons that you appreciate their work.
Career: Express your admiration for their entire body of work and how they’ve succeeded in their career. Perhaps include awards, challenges they had to overcome, specific shows where they distinguished themselves, great roles they’ve played, etc.
Focus Musical: Go into depth on the musical from the outline. Include details of who, what, when, and where it was performed, what themes were explored, what plot line it followed, and most importantly, your artist’s contribution to the show. Use examples from the show to reveal their artistry. You might use a quoted section from the dialogue or lyrics and present why you think the quote is significant. You could include your analysis of the questions posed above. Discuss moments from the show, and what made them stand out.
Conclusion: Finish with a clear statement of what you feel was significant about their contribution to musical theatre. Perhaps share how you identify with one of their characters or found personal relevance to their performance.
Use the Fan Letter button on the Blackboard site to submit your letter as an attached MS Word document. Please use a simple title for the document, like “wicked.doc†so that Blackboard and Turnitin won’t have a problem accepting it.
The Musical Research Paper (5 page minimum)
The Musical Research Paper has a formal, professional tone, and is intended to help students develop an original and thoughtful composition that is accurate in research and analysis, well organized in structure, and clear in comprehension. The main objective of the paper is to use analysis and research to inform us about the musical itself and how it reflects American life. Avoid merely summarizing the plot, and instead, analyze how the story and characters contribute to a social reflection, making sure that you focus on the lyrics and music and/or dance of at least three songs. You can also use background information about the librettist, lyricist and composer, details about the work itself (actors/singers, directors/choreographers, dialogue, etc.), and historical facts about the world outside the musical in order to draw parallels with the musical. It is always powerful to personalize, but keep the focus on the musical and your analysis of it, rather than on your own life. Here are some questions to help you in your analysis:
How does the music, lyrics and dancing contribute to storytelling?
What are the main themes and is there a statement made by the show?
How is the musical a reaction to something happening in the country at the time?
Is there a character who represents some issue from the era? Are there characters who function as members of the society of the time?
Does the style of the music or staging reflect a quality or issue of the world of the play/musical?
How does the musical reflect the culture that produced it?
In either case, you need to argue your position by explaining how specific examples from the musical support it. Take us into the musical by drawing examples from it, rather than discussing only the era from when the show was produced. A dialogue sequence or a monologue from the libretto may serve your claim as evidence, but also consider the dramatic action (what happens in a scene), as well as characters, the lyrics of the songs, and the style of the music (which communicates feeling more directly than words).
This paper requires more than a paraphrasing from Wikipedia or enotes.com; it demands that you read the actual libretto and/or view the work itself in some form, and apply your critical thinking to it. Do NOT choose one of the six musicals we have focused on in class. The experience is meant to be your own exploration of a work of your choice that does not simply repeat something already covered in class.
The Research Paper should utilize at least 3 to 5 works as sources in the List of Works Cited, and include at least 3 to 5 citations to those sources in the text. Citing your sources not only avoids plagiarism, but gives your paper more credibility. Humanities follows MLA Documentation practice, and you need to use that system for this paper. It won’t hurt you to try a different format from what you may be used to. To acknowledge your sources in the text of the paper, type the author’s last name and a page number within parentheses at the end of the sentence that includes the author’s idea or quotation (Parenthetical Documentation). Do not put whole titles or website addresses in a citation; you will only need a List of Works Cited page at the end of the paper (arranged alphabetically) instead of the usual Endnotes and Bibliography pages. These examples should help guide you, but for specific instructions on creating all forms of documentation, you should consult the MLA Guidelines. If you do not possess a style manual, you might wish to use the online site at Purdue to help you (
NOTE ON SOURCES: Though you can get familiar with your musical by doing preliminary research using sources from the “surface web” (sources one can access with any search engine, like Wikipedia, bookrags, enotes, sparknotes, etc.), you need to access works for your List of Works Cited from the “deep web” (sources one can only access through the library’s portal, like JStor, Project Muse, etc.). The use of “validated critics” on sites that are subject to “peer review” ensures that your work will have the authority to provide a strong argument for your thesis.
NOTE ON WRITING: If I determine that you need assistance with your writing beyond my ability to provide it, I will assign you to a CLASS tutor and receive reports from your tutor. If you do not work with the tutor until I say such work is no longer needed, I will reduce your grade by 20%.
Answer following questions … translate in french
Answer following questions … translate in french
Answer following questions … translate in french
Read the Project Management at MM Case Study on pages 324-327 in the textbook. Answer the Discussion Questions at the end of the Case Study.
Your responses must be complete, detailed and in APA format. All work must be 1 FULL page, single spaced, 12 font Times New Roman. The cover and reference page must be on separate pages. Please DO NOT include the question in your work as only your findings should be submitted.
With at least two references attached
Uploaded textbook as well for your reference…
Question 1
Explain the difference between batch processing and transaction (real time) processing. Describe a company (real or imagined) that uses batch processing (3-5 sentences). Do the same for a company that uses transactional processing.
Question 2
Explain what an ERP system is and what it does for a business. Elaborate on the advantages and disadvantages of an ERP system in a manufacturing business.
Question 3
What are the two types of knowledge discussed in this course? Explain each and provide an example.The two types of knowledge discussed in this course are explicit and tacit knowledge
Question 4
Name and describe the function of at least three participants in a Systems Development team. Be sure to mention how they work collaboratively to accomplish their goal.
Question 5
Name at least three project management tools and briefly describe the function they perform.
Question 6
Privacy at work is defined in company policies and procedures, describe one example of when a worker does something that could be a breach of these rules.
Possible Answer should mention:
Question 7
Many mistakes are blamed on computer error, list and describe at least three common errors that are actual caused by human error.
Question 8
Name 5 ways that a computer can be the object of a crime.
Question 9
Two computer-related scams are phishing and vishing. Describe each one, pointing out the difference.
Question 10
What are the phases of the Systems Development Life Cycle? Name each phase and describe what happens to the project at that time.
These are the phases of the Systems Development Life Cycle
Investigation
Analysis
Design
Construction
Integration and Testing
Implementation
Please provide original work. No plagiarizing.
Body of Research Paper
Follow the directions below for the completion of the body paragraphs draft assignment for Unit VI. If you have questions, please email your professor for assistance.
Purpose: The purpose of this assignment is to continue drafting your academic argumentative research paper.
Description: In this assignment, you will write three to four body paragraphs according to the form that is explained in “Lesson 3: The Body Paragraphs.” The following requirements must be included in the assignment:
Example: Click here to access an example paper with body paragraphs. This is a real student example. It is not a perfect example for all grammar, syntax, or APA, though it is in very good shape. The goal of viewing this example should be to see the overall structure and content.
Using Excel, complete the following:
HappyPups makes pet cameras and will be introducing their newest product, the Furbo. The Furbo is a camera that allows dog owners to check in on their pup, give their pup a treat, and talk to them while they are away. HappyPups spent $375,000 on consumer demand studies and an additional $40,000 on research and development to get the perfect product for all pet lovers. Each Furbo will sell for $195. It is expected that Furbo product will generate additional revenue from the sale of treats that are compatible with device. It is expected that 50% of Furbo purchases will result in an additional $15 net profit from treat sales at time of purchase. The Furbo has a variable cost of $125.00, and the project will incur an annual fixed cost of $1,400,000 each year. HappyPups will need to purchase a new machine to manufacture the Furbo for $2,000,000, and will be depreciated using the 3-yr MACRS schedule. HappyPups anticipates it will be able to sell the machine for $750,000 at the end of the project in three years. In order to promote the product, HappyPups will initially set aside $1,000,000 worth of inventory at the beginning of the project and will readjust NWC levels to reflect 10% of Furbo Sales (not including the treats). All inventory will be liquidated at the end of project. However, by introducing the Furbo, HappyPups anticipate that will take away roughly $1,000,000 in revenue each year from its existing pet camera line. The required return for the project is 20%, and the tax rate is 21%
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Year |
MACRS |
|
1 |
33.33% |
|
2 |
44.45% |
|
3 |
14.81% |
|
4 |
7.41% |
Part 1: MET value conversion
Use this equation
(MET value of activity x 3.5 x body wt in kg)/200 = kcal burned for 1 minute of that activity
Mary Julia exercises for 5 days a week
On Mon/Wed/Fri she goes to Zumba. It is a 50 minute class and a 4.5 MET level
Mary Julia weighs 154 lbs
On Tue/Thurs she walks for 30 minutes at a 15 minute mile pace for a 5 MET activity level
Part II: Atwater conversion and nutrient percentages:
This is Mary Julia’s lunch nutrients…..She gained a pound and now weighs 155 lbs
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Food |
Grams of Fat |
Grams of COH |
Grams of Protein |
|
Tortilla |
4 |
22 |
3 |
|
Turkey |
1 |
1 |
10 |
|
Cheddar Cheese |
7 |
0 |
5 |
|
Mayo |
10 |
0 |
0 |
|
Pretzels |
0 |
24 |
2 |
|
Coke |
0 |
25 |
0 |
Part III Cumulative Essay – 3 pages, double spaced and times new roman
Write a 3 page, double spaced paper which covers the following:
Your nutrition and health baseline – describe in detail what you learned about your eating habits, body composition and energy expenditure. How do these things affect your overall health and wellbeing?
Comment on each of the nutrients – protein, carbohydrates, lipids, water, vitamins and minerals. Tell me something that you found interesting or something about that nutrient knowledge that caused a change in your eating habits.
Comment on the connection you now see between Nutrition and Health or Nutrition and Exercise. Describe a topic that was new to you in the connection between our dietary intake and how it is connected to our daily lives or the activity we do.
Hello, I message you before about the upcoming assignment. There will be 3 papers, two of them are revise. This is should be the easiy one, it is essay you wrote, I revised I bit and submit it. I need a final Portfolio Essay, around 1750 words. I would attach the requirement teacher’s comment/feed back below. Need it by Wednesday After noon!
Feedback : You wrote a very convincing argument regarding equality or rather lack of equality toward African Americans. You used your sources well, and used great logic in convincing your reader. Excellent job! My suggestions are to use more of your voice and understanding of the matter instead of paraphrasing and quoting so much. Also, make sure you include all of your important points from your thesis in your conclusion. You were missing the point about financial disparity. And lastly, try and reflect your thesis in your body paragraphs.
Requirement : Revising for the Portfolio Version is not the same as editing where one works primarily on the grammar, syntax, and spelling. “Revising†means not just to edit the essay but to rewrite it by adding and deleting material to improve its structure and development.
More specific instructions repeated from earlier modules (just in case you breezed over them without retaining the information): After you’ve revised Essays 2 and 3 based on my suggestions, try to add in at least one more additional quotation from an outside source. Basically, in order to strengthen your argument, add at least one more textual example where you feel it could improve your argument. After finding your additional outside source, perform the usual routine below:
Do NOT include an outline but DO include a Works Cited page for each essay. When you include at least one additional Outside/Researched Source to Essays 2 and 3 though more outside sources would be even better, what you’ll be doing is bringing in quotations from another outside library database source (EbscoHost or SIRS preferably). I showed you a video on how to do this in Week 08: Bringing in Outside Sources. You could research facts, statistics, or professional opinions related to your topic. If you do not properly cite this research in MLA format, your grade will suffer. Be sure to include in-text citations and a Works Cited list for this entry. For help, go to https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/01/ (Links to an external site.). Another helpful resource I’ve recommended before is to use Calvin College’s Knight Cite: https://www.calvin.edu/library/knightcite/ (Links to an external site.)
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