edit errors, communications homework help

Hey Brenda, I sent the research paper to my prof and she said there is some missing commas in the paper so I need to edit that. can you do that for me?

she sent me this (

Afnan – On my quick review, this looks very good. I noticed one error:

Khana & Afzalb finds organizational knowledge is necessary to the development of an effective organizational culture.

You should always have the year included: Khana & Afzalb (2011) finds organizational knowledge is necessary to the development of an effective organizational culture. Also, review for punctuation (commas and quotes) I noticed you were missing a few commas where they are necessary.).

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Regardless of your subject the general outline of your final paper should look like this; Introduction – Your introduction should describe the nature and structure of the organization that you are analyzing, focusing on the different levels of employees in the organization and their IT needs. Other topics to cover in this section could include what business pressures your company is facing and how technology can help them to meet the demands of these pressures, how IT supports people and organizational activities in your company and an analysis of the organization’s internal operations against Porter's value chain model and Porter’s competitive forces model. Organization’s Current Infrastructure and Use of Information Systems – Topics to cover in this section include your organization’s current network architecture, use of mobile and wireless technologies, use of transaction processing systems and functional information systems, such as production and operations, marketing and sales, accounting and finance, and human resource information systems, use of enterprise applications for supply chain management, enterprise resource management, business process management, product lifecycle management, and/or customer relationship management.

How quickly can you form a mental image of another person? What does the image contain? Is it purely

How quickly can you form a mental image of another person? What does the image contain? Is it purely visual, or does it capture something about their personality, group membership, or other ‘social’ information? How are such impressions formed?

Trace the development of slavery prior to the American Colonies? What is the Barbados connection?…

Trace the development of slavery prior to the American Colonies? What is the Barbados connection? What types of crops were grown in what regions? How did the slave experience differ from region to region? Who was William Lynch and why was he important to the development of slavery in the Chesapeake? Finally, describe the Stono Uprising.

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The choice program in MD and Maryland Sheriffs' Youth Ranch Write a two to three (2-3) page paper in which you: Identify at least two (2) juvenile delinquency reduction efforts/programs currently in operation in your community. Determine the main sociological theories that underlie these interventions that shape your community’s public policy for delinquency prevention. Propose one to two (1–2) ideas that you believe would improve your community’s juvenile delinquency prevention efforts. Justify the response with examples that illustrate your ideas being used successfully in other communities. Use at least three (3) quality references. Note: Wikipedia and other Websites do not qualify as academic resources. Your assignment must follow these formatting requirements: Be typed, double-spaced, using Times New Roman font (size 12), with one-inch margins on all sides; citations and references must follow APA or school-specific format. Check with your professor for any additional instructions. Include a cover page containing the title of the assignment, the student’s name, the professor’s name, the course title, and the date. The cover page and the reference page are not included in the required assignment page length.

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The company with which you are currently employed (Coushatta Casino Resort) is experiencing a financial crisis. The chief financial officer (CFO) has suddenly resigned and no one is discussing the reasons. The U.S. Securities and Exchange Commission (SEC) is investigating your company's accounting practices and from the documents they have requested, the issue seems to concern revenue recognition. Rumors are beginning to circulate that suggest inappropriate behavior on the part of your company. The organization is a publicly traded company and, as such, the company is required to issue a public notice concerning the sudden vacancy of the CFO. As a certified public accountant on the team drafting the notice, you are involved in communicating the current situation to the general public. Write a press release of no more than 700 words. You may research to find examples of public notices. Use the examples to determine how you will format your press release. Write an accompanying internal memo of no more than 700 words to your manager. Include the following in your memo: Outline what your company is legally required to do. Explain the value of the public communication in this situation. Examine the balance between calming external stakeholders and the ethical considerations of providing all the information that is required by the SEC. Explain how the perception of the press release will affect public opinion.

How to do a market classification

Briefly state the basic characteristics of pure competition, pure monopoly, monopolistic competition, and oligopoly. Under which of these market classifications does each of the following most accurately fit? (a) a supermarket in your hometown; (b) the steel industry; (c) a Kansas wheat farm; (d) the commercial bank in which you or your family has an account; (e) the automobile industry. In each case justify your classification. 

Understand the ethical responsibilities of a managerial accountant.

Understand the ethical responsibilities of a managerial accountant.

Police Discretion

Police Discretion 

Prepared a 200 word short argument of a con in police discretion, in other words why is it bad.  Make sure you look critically at the issues by examining the short and long term impact your position may have on society, public safety, the constitution, etc. 

All must be done in APA format.

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Find at least two articles from the ProQuest database that highlight and discuss two of the biggest challenges facing financial managers today.  One of the articles should be about the challenge of maintaining ethical financial integrity. The other article can be on any other challenge that a financial manager may face (e.g., competition, foreign markets, government intervention, etc.).

Summarize your findings from the articles in a 2-3 page paper excluding title page and references page(s).  The paper should be formatted according to APA style as outlined in the Ashford Writing Center. Be sure to properly cite your sources using APA style.