Revision-plans

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Before you read the instruction I will upload for you a picture to see how the way you will answer the Q.

I want you to do for me this things.

Summary: Summarize the content of all your reviews, both from your peers and from me. Discuss the issues that were mentioned by most of your reviewers, or issues mentioned by only one reviewer. Notice any trends that appear in your feedback.

Analysis: Discuss the comments you found helpful or not helpful, and why you found them helpful/not helpful. Notice whether comments seemed out-of-place. Determine whose advice you are planning to use in your revision, as well as whose advice you may not use.

Revision Plan: State your goals for revision. Identify three main issues that you plan to address when you revise. Do not include issues like spelling, grammar, or proofreading in this section.Make this just 1 page

This is the review from a peer in my class :

Love the introduction! Gives a huge heads-up on what you are going to tell me about your paper. Well done.

A comma should be replaced with the period, and the capitalized S should be lowercased.

Awesome way of explaining how important energy is to human beings. Also, great explanation of what “sustainable energy” is!

An “s” must be included as “Nature” is in a singular form.

A little too much repetition. I think you can draw the conclusion that “renewable resources” are reliable for human survival in the sentence “These resources are renewable.”

Nice sentence structure! Great topic introductory.

You need a bit of a transition before this sentence. (: It would make the paragraphs feel more connected and flow!

Third world countries “do not even have (adjective) energy.

Good unbiased point of view. Make sure to give supporting details in the final draft!

Are you saying that researchers are not finding a way to use green resources already, which is why you are suggesting that they need to be motivated to do so? Clarify a little bit and you’ll go long ways with this.

Is this supposed to be a conclusion? These are strong opinions rather than theses. Maybe reconsider where this should go.

You might want to consider your word choice here, as said above, opinions on things that are not in your conclusion paragraph might weaken your claims.

Great introduction to your topic! A respected clarification of who your resourcer is for your introduction really sets you in a good stance. Good job.

Great summary of a research. You didn’t include opinions, which is good! I like how you summarized it to be simple and yet, quite important sounding that coorelates to the source.

Excellent point of view here! Very strong opinion that is connected to your sources.

Great flow, but you need a transitional word before you continue with your sentence. Besides that, very good.

Nice! I like how you made this paragraph flow with summarizing relavent points and with a good structure. Your claim will be backed up with this.

Great point of view that correlates with your sources!

Remember to put a transitional word for your next paragraph!

Good summarization so far.

Good structured sentence that transitions from the previous one.

Make sure to conclude this in your conclusion paragraph, as you used the word “we” and your opinions go there! Great so far.

Great summarization. You included a good transitional word to connect your sentences together as well. Bravo.

Really good supporting detail for your claim!

A period should be replaced with the comma.

This should be in active voice. “he takes”. Would be clearer and better for your paper!

Great so far! You’ve done correct structured sentences and used active verbs, including transitional words.

The extra spaces in after information is not needed. Might need to fix that.

All authors? Be specific on what kind of authors are expert on green energy.

Good conclusion and point of view! Supportive detail as well

Art-History-3-Short-Answer-Essay-

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INSTRUCTIONS: Read the Pollock article carefully. It is helpful to take notes while reading in order to organize your thoughts. Answer the prompt in the format of a 3 page, double-spaced, typed essay, 12 point font. Use an intro (thesis), body (evidence), conclusion format. Remember to edit and check your so that it reads as nicely as possible. I recommend reading your work aloud or to a friend, this process often catches many errors. You can find the reading under “Files” of our canvas course website.

PROMPT: (Write an essay that addresses these questions)

What does Pollock refer to when she discusses “the avant-garde gambit?” Give some examples of how nineteenth century artists participated in “the avant-garde gambit.” Explain Pollock’s feminist critique of Gauguin’s painting “The Spirit of the Dead is watching.” Can you think of any contemporary artists/entertainers/athletes/public figures who participate in “the avant-garde gambits?”

ps: after you being assigned, I need to send you by email the article to be read which is too big to attach here. so after being assigned pls provide me your email.

Locate-an-article-that-focuses-on-managing-conflict-in-an-organization-through-communication-

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Locate an article that focuses on managing conflict in an organization through communication.

The article must be clearly related to the course content and have the potential to contribute significant analysis and

substantial engagement with the course topic.

For this assignment, you will need to accurately identify the article’s premise, significant points in support of the premise,

and the significance of those points to the course and/or the field. You need to present an insightful and thorough analysis

of the article with strong arguments and evidence. Your interpretation will need to be both reasonable and compelling.

You will need to apply course concepts in your analysis.

As you write the review, be certain to analyze the type of conflict discussed in the article. Use the classifications discussed

in the Unit III Lesson (Rahim’s functional outcomes and Rahim’s dysfunctional outcomes) in your analysis. Be certain to

suggest communication techniques to manage functional conflict or, alternately, communication techniques to resolve

dysfunctional conflict.

Along with the article being reviewed, you will need to reference at least two peer-reviewed sources. Use the standard

five-paragraph format (introduction/body/conclusion). APA format should be used. The critical review should be a

minimum of two pages in length. Content, organization, and grammar/mechanics will be evaluated.

250-words-from-the-reading-

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Locke speaks a great deal about legislative power (especially compared to the previous thinkers we have examined). Write of approximately 250 words where you discuss his conception of legislative power and its limits. You should cite the text where appropriate.

Identify-and-discuss-the-four-distinct-business-models-that-the-Ready-brothers-have-journeyed-on-their-path-to-success

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There are two cases and some questions need to do after read.

Cholera-Inflections-Agent

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The description of the assignment is attached below however, Malaria can’t be used because it has already been chosen by another student thanks!

English-1101-Essay-1-Description-Rubric-500-words-English-homework-help

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English 1101: Essay 1: Description Rubric-500 words

For this assignment you will write a descriptive essay about your room. The essay should be informative .

How-Citizens-Engage-in-Community-Oriented-Policing

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Community policing should be a citizen owned effort. Of course the police and other city agencies should be involved when necessary but the most consistent and comprehensive effort should belong to the neighborhoods and businesses that are in the affected area.

Assume that you are a community leader in an area with no ongoing community-oriented policing effort. For this week’s assignment you are to evaluate the role of citizens in the community-oriented policing effort. How would a group of citizens assess the needs of the community and critically analyze what resources they have and need to make a positive impact? What would be the best strategy be for your group to engage with the police and other city agencies in this effort? It may be helpful for you to go to this website to view some Award-Winning Community Policing Strategies: https://ric-zai-inc.com/Publications/cops-w0451-pu….

Write a 2 page APA style paper. Only the body of the paper will count toward the word requirement (title page and references are in addition to the 2 pages)

In your paper, cite at least 2-3 references using the APA style guide format for in-text citation.

utilitarian-moment

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recall a moment when you acted as a utilitarian. Calculate the net benefit that you brought with your action by applying J.S .Mill and Bentham ‘s felicific calculus

1-2-Industrialization-After-the-Civil-War-Final-Paper

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After the Civil War, the United States became a much more industrialized society. Between 1865 and 1920, industrialization improved American life in many ways. However, industrialization also created problems for American society. Consider events that took place after the Civil War and discuss ways that industrialization affected the U.S. between 1865 and 1920.

You have already developed a thesis statement and developed an outline in which you identify three main points relevant to your topic. Now you will develop the final paper in which you explore your main points in detail.

Prompt: Discuss three (3) major aspects of industrialization between 1865 and 1920. Identify three (3) specific groups that were affected by industrialization and provide two examples for each group describing how the group was affected.

Key Themes:

  • United States industrialization improving and creating problems for American society
  • Society, the economy, and politics
  • Issues such as race, ethnicity, gender, and child labor
  • How industrialization affected the life of the average working American during this period
  • Events that took place after the Civil War

Write a three to five (3-5) page paper in which you:

  1. Introduce your paper with your previously crafted thesis statement.
  2. Discuss three (3) major aspects of industrialization between 1865 and 1920. In your response, consider society, the economy, and politics.
  3. Identify three (3) specific groups that were affected by industrialization and provide two examples for each group describing how the group was affected. (Consider issues such as race, ethnicity, gender, child labor, etc.)
  4. Summarize how industrialization affected the life of the average working American during this period. Use specific examples and details.
  5. Write using relevant explanations, examples, and evidence that logically support ideas.
  6. Demonstrate correct spelling, grammar, and writing mechanics.

Identify and discuss the different ways that the heritage of slavery, the Civil War, Reconstruction, and segregation have shaped America’s history.

  • Summarize and discuss the ways that formal policies of government have influenced the direction of historical and social development in the United States.
  • Recognize the major turning points in American history since the Civil War.
  • Use technology and information resources to research issues in contemporary U.S. history.
  • Write clearly and concisely about contemporary U.S. history using proper writing mechanics.