Grammar questions

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Section 1: Identify, Correct, and Explain the Errors (50 points, total)

In the following sentences, please complete the following:

– Circle/underline the error

– Identify the type of error (subject-verb disagreement, sentence fragment, non parallel list, etc.)

– Define the error (briefly describe why the error is incorrect)

– Rewrite the sentence without the error.

*note that some sentences may contain more than one error—correct them all. I put some punctuation errors in there, too :). You may have to add words and switch around phrases when correcting the sentences. If you have already described why an error is incorrect, please feel free to write “see number x for explanation.”

Go!

1. While mixing quite delicious Shirley temples, with ruby red syrup mixed in with bar spoons, the cherries spilled all over the floor, which upset me and Shirley.

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2. Maria and Keri, frustrated at the first question, audibly complained to Professor Sam: “This is so stupid and so are you”, they said. She then swiftly up from her chair. But she sits back down after she realized her grave error.

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3. After complaining and forgetting that Professor Sam is erroneously sensitive especially concerning his composition of grammatical errors, we found we enjoyed the test, no one minded that Professor Sams sentences were like that.

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4. John was upset. Because he thought this test were going to be easier. Turns out he likes sitting in Sarah’s seat better than he likes grammar; an admirable quality.

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5. I gave the test to a very excited CO 201 class. They cheered—”Grammar is awesome, we really love it,” crying tears of joy and appreciation. We really wonder who you plan on administering it to next!

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6. Seeing that grammar can be very complicated, and yet exceedingly thrilling and useful knowledge for us to obtain. It matters to the whole lot of we in CO 201.

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7. Okay that one was easier but do you think that you will be able to get this one, to correct the errors and ultimately scoring more highly than her?

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8. After they had been baked in the oven for 35 minutes, Fannie and Freddie decided to add more sauce to the pizzas.

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9. HELPING HURT CHILDREN IS REWARD ENOUGH

(real headline from The Charlotte Observer)

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10. JUDGE DEBATING STATE EXECUTION PROCEDURE RESPECTED BY LAWYERS

(real headline from San Francisco Chronicle)

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Jazz Research Paper

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Research papers
consist of an introduction, background research, interview, and
conclusion on a topic involving a notable figure in the history of jazz.The
topic should be on an issue which had an impact on the society and
culture of the time and place of this individual, and which continues to
have relevance in the present day.A quality research paper must also have a thesis (organizing argument) stating a proposition. The paper should begin with an introduction describing the topic, why you chose it, and stating your specific thesis.The middle of the paper will consist of background research on the music and culture pertaining to your chosen individual. The
paper should end with a conclusion that revisits the original thesis,
highlights what you learned through your research about the connection
between your subject and your topic, and how the experience has impacted
or altered your views about jazz, culture, and the world around you.

You must include
a bibliography, showing that you used a variety of resources with at
least 4 articles, books, and encyclopedias.You must include at least one of each of those.A good resource to start with is Oxford Music Online

(http://library.calstate.edu/northridge/databases/proxy/20) (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site..You
can also find a list of relevant jazz books on page A39 of your text,
which you then can search for at the Oviatt Library and in the Music
Library.You may NOT use your text itself as a resource. The Oviatt Database for music is at: (http://library.calstate.edu/northridge/databases/subject/music) (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site..
You may also find articles from jazz publications or other news
publications online, but please avoid websites such as Wikipedia or any
website that does not cite its sources or provide credentials to show
that its authors are experts in their subject.

The research paper will be submitted in four installments.One grade (10%) will be added for each week an installment is early.One grade (10%) will be deducted for each week an installment is late.Failure to submit an acceptable thesis (1st installment) by the 8th week will result in an automatic grade of F for the course.Failure to submit a final paper (4thinstallment) by the 15th week will result in an automatic grade of F for the course.All installments will be submitted via Canvas as a text document.

  • Installment #1 (20 points): At
    week 4, students will submit the introduction of the paper (title,
    topic and the person related to your topic, why you chose this person
    and topic, and your thesis in bold print).This introduction may be anywhere from a few sentences to two pages in length, as long as the above requirements are met.Failure to submit an acceptable thesis (1st installment) by the 8th week will result in an automatic grade of F for the course.
  • Installment #2 (30 points):At
    the end of week 7, students will submit the background
    research/citation showing high-quality, relevant research sources and
    knowledge of proper citation procedures. Any
    source from which quotes or paraphrased material is taken must be
    cited, otherwise you are guilty of plagiarism, a serious academic
    offense (See http://catalog.csun.edu/policies/academic-dishonesty/ ). I
    would like to see at least four bibliography entires, each from a
    different types of source (book, article, internet article, interview,
    etc). Each of the bibliography entries must be cited in proper MLA-8
    formatting. Help with MLA-8 formatting can be found here: http://www.easybib.com/guides/citation-guides/mla-8/ (Links to an external site.)Links to an external site..
  • Installment #4 (50 points): By week 13, students will submit the entire research paper, organized into these subject headings:
    • Title Page
    • Introduction
    • Background
    • Interview
    • Conclusion
    • References

By university standards, this paper is supposed to be a minimum of 2,500 words minimum (not counting the bibliography), double spaced, in a common 12-point font. I, however
am a firm believer in content, so as long as this is a well-researched,
well-written paper, that shows that you learned as much as possible
about your topic, than I consider that a great paper. So don’t feel
obligated to meet that 2,500 quota. Content is the most important!

Try to include musical examples to illustrate your points.

response writing

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Read the following part, write 300 words response to it, need to answer the last questions he mentioned.

“From the video and the “kitchen debate”, there’s a lot of differences between the United States and Soviet about their way of life. The first thing we know is about houses. In the United States houses very pricey and we should sign a contract up to thirty years. Nikita Sergeyevich Khrushchev Soviet Premier that day has a different opinion about that. He thinks that houses should not be given time about 20 years. It should long last for the children and grandchildren. He also protests how united states houses made of. It should not be made of plywood, must made of reinforced concrete and brick so the houses won’t get collapse. But the Vice President of United States that day, Richard Nixon, disagree and he thinks the grandchildren must be given a choice what kind of house they want. Another difference between these two nations is about women’s role in society. The United States saw women as homemakers. They are responsible to manage their home. From preparing a meal, buying food, managing budget and control of expenditures, and cleaning the house. This situation makes the United States invent some technology that helps women to do their chores. Electronic appliances like dishwasher, eating utensil made from steel or aluminum, or some cooking tools which help women prepare the food. Industry in united states was growing, especially in technology, television, cars, and/or fashion. Soviet aside, wants women to join workforces. They assigned to a local canteen to prepare food for workers. Food distribution on soviet held by the government. They distribute the food to a local canteen and give them what they need. I think these two nations hold their ideology. But nowadays, communism idea has no place again in the world. I think it’s too ideal and really work in the utopian world.

The question is, what do you think about live without an option? Which our work, our food, and anything else is given by the government.”

Checkpoint 2 topic research and rationale

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This is part of many check points. You already helped me with the first check poin: here https://www.studypool.com/discuss/9170630/checkpoint-1

You will keep working on the speech by Obama which called: Obama’s 2004 DNC keynote speech

You can view the speech at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ueMNqdB1QIE

for check point 2 please do the following:

Write an approximately 3 pages include the following :

a) An explanation of the significance of your topic/artifact. (Talk about when the speech was given and the reason of it and why it is important. As you research Please indicate how many people watch the speech (the views), how many people physically attend, what its impact on popular culture has been and other Important information you want to add. (this should be one paragraph)

b) An explanation of what others (especially scholars) have said about your topic. Some have said, for example, that American Idol perpetuates consumption due to its frequent product placement, while others have said it promotes democratic participation.

I have attached some articles that you can use. You can search and use the once you like too but remember they MUST be scholars articles. Try to find some articles related to the speech and if you could not find many try to find articles talk about Obama. this is a good example https://www.nytimes.com/2016/07/27/magazine/the-sp… and also try see the attachments.

C. For this paper, you should integrate this research to construct an argument as to why your topic is an important one to study and what the purpose of your original research is by using your research to:

a) Explain the significance of your topic,

b) Explain what others have said about it, and

c) Explain the purpose of your original research, i.e., what you hope to find out as a result of your original research. (you could talk about Obama is a great speaker that has talent in converting people…etc. and also talk about cluster method and how we can use it to find our how Obama is a great speaker.)

let me know if you have any question

Tesla; NASDAQ; TSLA SEC 10-K Project PowerPoint

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  • Use your weekly SEC 10-K reports in completing your first draft of the presentation Post a draft of your presentation in the SEC 10-K Discussion for Week Six. Your power point slides presentation is to be submitted as an Assignment by April 30 in your assignment folder.

  • No more than 10 -12 powerpoint slides.

  • The first slide must include the name of the company, the name of the class, student’s name, and professor’s name.

  • The last slide will contain at least two citations (references). The remaining slides must contain a reflection of your answers and completion of weekly requirements for weeks one through five and to include the requirements listed below.

  • The beginning of the slide(s) after the first slide needs to include 1) a brief summarized the description of your company’s business, 2) your company’s products and 3) a listing of your company’s divisions (or segments)

  • Do not cut and paste from your weekly answers and requirements or the information in your company’s SEC 10-K reports.

  • Make sure that all sides contain approximately the same amount of information.

  • Use visual cues like bullets, graphics, tables, spreadsheets, color, etc. to engage and captivate your audience.

  • You could use bar graphs to show the sales (revenues), gross profit, net income and inventory balances for the three years with footnotes showing the changes (trends) in amounts and percentages.

  • Imagine that you are presenting this information to an audience of potential investors. How would they react to each slide? How do the slides portray the financial condition, the share of the market and control over operations of your company?

  • Include the balances for three years for sales, gross profit, net income, and inventory.

  • The amounts shown throughout the powerpoint slides need to be the same as that on the company’s SEC 10-K report.

  • Make sure the slides do not contain errors (mathematically, misspelled words or grammar errors).

  • Feel free to attach an audio component if you wish to enhance it even further.

determine how personality theory’s application has evolved in the selected area, Annotated outline help

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The Signature Assignment for this class requires you to assess what

direction personality theory and research will take in the twenty-first

century. Based upon your personal interests in psychology, select an area –

abnormal, developmental, organizational, police, military, forensic, etc. –

and then determine how personality theory’s application has evolved in the

selected area. For example, perhaps new personality assessments and tests

have been used to identify employee integrity; a study has identified the

best personality mix for work team; or, perhaps research has proposed a new

way to evaluate abnormal behavior.

Be sure your analysis addresses the following:

*Identify the key theoretical perspective(s) you have reviewed in this

course that have influenced the development of the selected area of

psychology.

*Discuss the impact of cultural influences on personality as applied to the

selected field.

*Note any ethical challenges that might exist in applying personality

testing or conducting personality research in the selected field.

*Suggest what new research opportunities exist to expand the application of

personality theory in the selected field.

You must locate at least 10 articles from peer-reviewed journals and other

scholarly sources that support your investigation. Remember that you will

incorporate your faculty feedback from your annotated outline into your

final assignment.

Your outline should demonstrate thoughtful consideration of the ideas and

concepts presented in the course by providing new thoughts and insights

relating directly to this topic. Your response should reflect scholarly

writing and current APA standards. Be sure to adhere to Northcentral

University’s Academic Integrity Policy.

Assignment length: 2-Page Annotated outline and References

Upload the assignment using the Upload Assignment button below.

Law 7/1 Details in comments

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With the growing number of cyber crimes, law enforcement must maintain current knowledge of technology. Locate an article or a case regarding a cyber crime. Address the following:

  • Briefly summarize the article or case in one paragraph.
  • What technology did law enforcement use to combat the crime?

Review the posts of your fellow learners and respond to at least two. In your response posts, you must do one or more of the following:

  • Ask an analytical question.
  • Offer a suggestion.
  • Elaborate on a particular point.
  • Provide an alternative opinion supported with research.

Be sure to support your initial post and follow-up posts with scholarly examples from the module readings and additional literature where appropriate. You must cite all references according to APA style.

Middle age adult exercise

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Answer the discussion question below and us APA format for any references used.

For the middle-aged adult, exercise can reduce the risk of various health problems. Choose three health issues that regular physical exercise and activity can help prevent and manage. Discuss the prevalence of each of these health problems in society today. Describe measures that you would take as a nurse to assist clients with health promotion measures to incorporate exercise and physical activity into their lives. Include the kind of activities you would recommend, the amount of exercise, and the approach you would use to gain cooperation from the client. Support your response with evidence-based literature.

Complete Addiction Treatment Plan for Foundations of Addiction and Addictive Behavior Course

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PLEASE FOLLOW INSTRUCTIONS CLOSELY….PLEASE MAKE SURE TO USE THE TEMPLATE TO COMPLETE THE ASSIGNMENT…PLEASE MAKE SURE TO INCORPORATE MY CONCLUSION FROM WEEK 5 ASSIGNMENT (ATTACHED)

Addiction Treatment Plan

For this assignment, you will use the same case selected for u05a1(ATTACHED BELOW) and analyze the sections of the treatment plan template. This treatment plan will address both the addiction and any co-occurring mental health diagnoses identified in u05a1. The conclusions reached in u05a1 regarding the specific DSM-based diagnoses, strengths, and challenges should take into consideration any feedback from your instructor. Make any needed revisions to u05a1 before developing the treatment plan. Include your revised assessment (the last section of u05a1) as part one of this assignment.

Follow these assignment requirements:

  • Written communication: Written communication is thoughtful and free of errors that detract from the overall message.
  • APA formatting: Resources and citations are formatted according to APA (6th edition) style and formatting.
  • Number of resources: Minimum of 10 scholarly sources. Distinguished submissions will likely exceed this number.
  • Length of paper: 6–8 typed, double-spaced pages, plus title page and references.
  • Font and font size: Times New Roman, 12 point.

DDL and SQL database writing assignment

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Using the model you defined in Week Two, provide the Data Definition Language (DDL) needed to create tables, attributes, primary and foreign key constraints, any other constraints needed on a single attribute or across attributes to ensure only valid data is entered, and indexes or other structures needed to make the performance adequate for the common and urgent operations.
Write the SQL code to perform each of the common and urgent activities. Explain how you expect it to use the defined structures efficiently.
Describe what tools would be available in a commonly used database to determine if the database is following the execution plan you envision.
Combine all items and submit in a 1- to 2-page APA formatted paper.