fixing my first draft

I need you to fix my first draft which is in the attachment below.

These are the mistakes that you should fix:-

1- before telling us about how the stakeholder ( EPA ) uses visual rhetoric to spread its message/goals, explain what their goals are … you do that in the next body paragraph, but it needs to be in the introduction and before the thesis.

2- (rhetorical appeals) is one of my main points in thesis in my introduction, but it’s not mentioned again in the paper … there should be a body paragraph dedicated to it, with supporting evidence. so add one body paragraph about the rhetorical appeals which that analyze the two pictures in my paper.

3- there needs to be supporting evidence in every body paragraphs in my paper…either a citation from the epa’s website or another sources that I put in my works cited that discusses water conservation ( add in each body paragraph)

4- There are two sources on the works cited page, but neither is mentioned in the paper. None of the body paragraphs include supporting evidence. so try to use each source in my works cited to include it in my paper and cite it in MLA.

5- you should add one more source and use it in any body paragraph.

ACC 300 Week 3 Individual Assignment Part II

ACC 300 Week 3 Individual Assignment Part II

Write a Java application that inputs three integers from the user

1. Write a Java application that inputs three integers from the user and displays the sum, average, product, smallest, and largest of the numbers. Use a Scanner object to get the input from the user. Use System.out to output the results. The average should be a floating point result, and should be displayed with two digits after the decimal point.

 

2. Student will modify the Java application from program 1. The new version of the program will use JOptionPanes for input and output. Use String.format(“%.2f”, doubleVariable) to create a string representation with two digits following the decimal point.

 

I am using eclipse software browser is IE8, and I think compiler is JAVA based through eclipse. I will be away from terminal for several hours, but if you need any questions answered, then let me know. As you know, I will ONLY work with you exclusively. The time for this is 4 days, and is relatively simple, just have a heavy case load with statistics, and calcIII this semester. As always that you do, thenshow how you do the work, so I can learn from a grat one.

Your group has been hired by an advertising firm (solution attached)

Your group has been hired by an advertising firm that is developing a series of commercials for family-oriented products geared toward the entire family. They want to develop a series of commercials that will target family members at various life stages. Your group needs to thoroughly describe Erikson’s theory of Psychosocial development. In your description of each stage, identify and analyze a television, movie, or literary character for each stage of the theory. Discuss how that character typifies the stage and how the character is resolving the conflict. The marketing firm will use this information as they develop commercials targeting each developmental stage. Finally, provide a review of three recent studies relating to Erikson’s theory of development from the list below.

The advertising firm has requested that you submit a 4 to 5 page report summarizing your research in this area. Therefore, your group should submit one combined Word document that conforms to the following directions:

·         Give a description of Erikson’s theory, including the stages of development using the criteria listed above.

·         Identify a character at each stage.

·         Choose three of the following studies found in the Library.

·         For each one you choose, describe the study and discuss how it supports or does not support the information you have written in your report about Erikson.  Specifically:

o    Which particular aspects of the theory does the study examine?

o    Do the experimental or discussion results strengthen or weaken the theory and your ideas?  Why?

o    Do you agree or disagree with the conclusions?  Why or why not?

 

 

 

 

 

a car is traveling at a constant velocity of 80 km/hr due east. how far will the car travel…

a car is traveling at a constant velocity of 80 km/hr due east. how far will the car travel in 2.5?

BUS 308 week 1-5 Whole course A++ 100% .

BUS 308 week 1-5 Whole course A++ 100% .

Cash Accrual Revenue & Debt

Cash Accrual Revenue Debt.docx 

In a minimum of 300
words, respond to the following:

  • Select two different types of HCOs and comment on the
    most positive and most negative effects of using the cash versus accrual
    accounting method for the business. Additionally, include the effect of
    the choices on revenue recognition and matching principles.
  • Compare and contrast the following items, pointing out
    their key elements:
    • Gross revenue and net revenue
    • Patient service revenue and other revenue
    • Charity care and bad debt losses on the income sheet

Provide reasons for and
evidence in support of your responses.

Comment on the postings
of two of your classmates who chose a different business than yours.

Be sure to cite any
relevant resources used in framing your responses. Apply APA standards to cite
sources.

electrical engineering paper

i need help in writing an abstract and conclusion for my research paper in electrical engineering, the paper is already writen and the only 2 parts missing is an abstract and conclusion. please if you can help let me know, i need you to be sure before you email me that you can do it a 100 % 

 

thank you 

GBM 489 Week 2 Ind. Assignment Business Plan Article Analysis

GBM 489 Week 2 Ind. Assignment Business Plan Article Analysis