Peer Feedback

Answer each questions for two different essays. Totally 20 questions

Peer review questions to consider:

  1. What is the author trying to say about this experience? How can you tell?
  2. Does the author tell us something important directly? How might they show it to us instead?
  3. Is it clear who the author was both before and after the change?
  4. Are there things, places, or people in this essay that you would like described in more detail?
  5. Are there moments you would like to see expanded into scenes? Conversations you would like to hear as dialogue?
  6. What parts of the draft need the most clarification or elaboration? Be specific.
  7. Any suggestions for organizing the essay? Are there sections that feel out of place? Things that should be moved or deleted?
  8. What are the greatest strengths and weaknesses of your classmate’s essay? Can you point to areas that work well as examples for what to try in places that need more revision?
  9. Do you have any additional advice that would help this classmate do well on his/her essay? Share it here if so.
  10. Are there particular grammatical mistakes that come up more than once?

Assignment 4: Persuasive Paper Part 3: Possible Disadvantages, Answers, with Visuals

Using feedback from your professor and classmates, revise Parts 1 and 2, and add Part 3. Plan to include visuals to illustrate the advantages of your proposed solution.

My Feedback:

Developed Part 2: Solution to Problem and Advantages (3-4 pages for 6-8 pages total)Explained a detailed, viable solution for each advantage that supported your thesis with one or two (1-2) paragraphs. Stated, explained, and supported the first advantage to your solution. Used effective transitional words, phrases, and sentence. Provided a transitional paragraph that summarizes the proposed solution and its advantages. Used one or more rhetorical strategies (ethos, logos, pathos) to explain advantages. Supported advantage claims with at least three (3) additional quality relevant references. See APA format for proper in-text citations.

Write an eight to ten (8-10) page complete paper in which you:
Provide Part I: Revision of A Problem Exists (3-4 pages)

  1. Revise your Persuasive Paper Part 1: A Problem Exists, using feedback from the professor and classmates.

Provide Part 2: Revision of Part 2: Solution to Problem and Advantages (3-4 pages)

  1. Revise your Persuasive Paper Part 2: Solution to Problem and Advantages, using feedback from the professor and classmates.

Develop Part 3: Possible Disadvantages, Answers, with Visuals (1-2 pages, for 7-9 total pages)

  1. State, explain, and support the first disadvantage to your solution and provide a logical answer. This should be one (1) paragraph.
  2. State, explain, and support the second (and third if desired) disadvantage to your solution and provide a logical answer. This should be one or two (1-2) paragraphs.
  3. Include one or two (1-2) relevant visuals that help illustrate an advantage. Note: You must include a minimum of one (1) paragraph explaining the relevance of the included image. The responsibility of the author is to justify the inclusion (not to let the reader “figure it out”).
  4. Use effective transitional words, phrases, and sentences.
  5. Provide a concluding paragraph to summarize the proposed solution, its advantages, possible disadvantages, and answers to the disadvantages. Repeat or paraphrase your thesis statement.
  6. Develop a coherently structured paper with an introduction, body, and conclusion.
  7. Use one (1) or more rhetorical strategy (ethos, logos, pathos) to explain claims.
  8. Support disadvantages and answers with at least two (2) additional quality relevant references. Use at least eight (8) total for Parts 1, 2, and 3. Note: Wikipedia and similar Websites do not qualify as academic resources.

Your assignment must follow these formatting guidelines:

  • Be typed, double spaced, using Times New Roman font (size 12), with one-inch margins on all sides; citations and references must follow APA or school-specific format. Check with your professor for any additional instructions.
  • Include a cover page containing the title of the assignment, the student’s name, the professor’s name, the course title, and the date. The cover page and the reference page are not included in the required assignment page length.

Self-esteem and Impression management paper

In 750-1,000 words, provide a minimum of four personal examples to illustrate impression management, social tuning, social comparisons, mindsets, intrinsic/extrinsic motivation, or causal theories. One example provided must address face to face versus written communication styles. Are there measures that can be taken when communicating nonverbally to improve self-presentation, impression management, attributional inferences, and cognitive biases? Each example provided should be based upon how your personal views were shaped by parents, teachers, friends, community, culture, etc. Each example should be supported by relevant research. Use two to three scholarly sources to support your thinking, your textbook can be used as one of the resources. Prepare this assignment according to APA guidelines Style . An abstract is not required.

HCA 340- Week 3- Assignment

Final Project Outline/Annotated Bibliography
Before you begin, review the possible topics and requirements for your Final Project in Week Five. There are four topics that you may choose from and they are listed at the beginning of the Final Project prompt. Submit the following to your instructor for review: Highlighted below:
The Final Project should demonstrate an understanding of the reading assignments, class discussions, your own research and the application of new knowledge. It should utilize previous skills developed in foundational health care courses and apply them within the context and viewpoint of a health care administrator and their role in managing health and human services.
For the Final Project, the student will select one of the following topics and conduct scholarly and professional research while integrating the course’s learning outcomes to address a selected topic:
• Research specific leadership and management traits and theories necessary for managing a multidisciplinary and multicultural health care organization to promote organizational effectiveness.
• Present how strategic planning, performance improvement, and information systems are interrelated and fundamental to the delivery of quality health care.
• Examine the financial characteristics of health care delivery along with managing costs, revenues, and human resources.
• Analyze ethical and legal concepts, including specific federal regulations, required of health care organizations to ensure the delivery of high quality health care that protects patient safety.

Business problem/ Business Research

1.Reference this week’s lecture to develop a research question and a hypothesis for a hypothetical business problem of your choice. Explain the management dilemma, or the business problem that the research would attempt to solve. Your research question must relate to the business reason for the research. For example, “Why have sales of used cars been declining at a rate of 5% per month since July 2012 at Smith Motors?” is a valid research question because you can investigate it with research.

A hypothesis must state an “educated guess” about why you think something is happening; think about cause and effect. For example, “Sales are declining at Smith Motors due to road construction around our dealership” is a hypothesis because it offers a possible cause for the problem. “Sales are declining at Smith Motors” is not a hypothesis because it does not offer a possible cause for the problem. (350 Words)

2. Using the Ashford University Library, find a scholarly business research article on a topic you may want to write about for your final paper.

Sample topics include, but are not limited to:

  • Manufacturing Quality/Cost Improvement
  • Service Quality Improvement
  • Systems Design
  • Accounts Receivable/Billing/Accounts Receivable Aging
  • Marketing/Advertising Issues
  • Sales of Goods
  • Investments
  • Product Safety
  • Workplace Safety
  • Labor Pools
  • Human Resources matters of broad concern
  • Population Studies

Use the Library Research Tips Tutorial to help you complete this assignment. The tutorial covers what scholarly sources are and how to find them, generating and using keywords, and searching in the best library databases for business research.

Read the scholarly article all the way through before you post. In your post, provide

  • The citation formatted according to APA style as outlined in the Ashford Writing Center (points will be deducted if APA formatting is incorrect).
  • The article’s research question.
  • The article’s hypothesis.
  • A brief description, in your own words, about how the article answered the research question and tested the hypothesis.
  • Your evaluation of how well the study answered the question and tested the hypothesis.(350 Words)

English 102 Discussion on Carr’s Prologue: The Shallows: What the Internet is Doing to Our Brains, Chapter 2 and chapter 3

BOOK: Nicholas Carr’s The Shallows: What the Internet is Doing to Our Brains.

Discussion on Carr’s Prologue, Chapter 2 and chapter 3. Answer the questions below…

1) What does “the medium is the message” mean? Try to get at this in your own words.

4) What does it mean when Carr says that maps “’advance the evolution of abstract thinking’ throughout society” (41)?

5) How does the invention of the clock change how the mind works? What kinds of changes does he mean exactly? What kinds of changes beyond what even Carr tells us?

6) In talking about intellectual technologies (44) we have to ask: what would it matter if the determinists were right? How would it make us understand (differently than we now do) our smart phones, tablets, laptops and more?

Exit Strategies and Legal Issues, assignment help

For this assignment you will be directing your attention to the legal aspects of your proposed new business. There are a huge number of legal issues to think about such as the ownership structure of your business, how to protect yourself from lawsuits, what types of insurance to get, and many other issues that add complexity to the process of starting a business.

Also, consider your “end game” for your business. Remember, it will be easier to get financing for your business if you can convince your investors that there is a pot of gold somewhere in the near future. Do you think you can take your business public someday? Is there a large competitor who might be interested in buying your business some day? These are all issues to consider.

Carefully review the background materials on the exit strategies and legal issues, then write a 2- to 3-page paper addressing the following issues:

  1. What kind of legal structure do you think is best for your business? Consider all the major options discussed in Sherman (2012) and the Pearson tutorials, and then justify and explain your choice.
  2. What legal risks do you think your business might face and what strategies (such as insurance) will you use to address these potential risks? Review Pakroo and Stewart (2016) and the Pearson tutorials and use their information to help think about your answer.
  3. How long do you plan on owning and operating your business before your exit strategy?
  4. What will your exit strategy be? Explain your reasoning, and cite Reuvid (2011) and the Pearson tutorials as part of your answer.

Legal Writing, Written Assignment help

For this assignment assume that your firm, Stahl & Beetum, PC , 13 Sol St., Wigmore, IL 00001, served the interrogatories and Notice to Produce on Plaintiff’s attorney. The Wigmore Supreme Court Rule 213 Written Interrogatories in the upload below to Parties subsection (d) requires the opposing party to answer the interrogatories within 28 days of receipt. The Wigmore Supreme Court Rule 214 Discovery of Documents subsection (a) requires that the opposing party tender the requested documents within 28 days of receipt of the Notice to Produce. The Wigmore Supreme Court Rules are provided here.

Your supervising attorney, B. G. Brothers tells you that she served Interrogatories and a Notice to Produce on Plaintiff’s counsel over 120 days ago. She further tells you that she has had two personal conferences with Plaintiff’s counsel, Rich N. Moore, requesting that he immediately provide his client’s responses to both discovery requests. In both conferences Mr. Moore promised to serve his client’s responses to both discovery requests within two weeks, but he has not done so. Brothers tells you she is tired of waiting and getting empty promises from Plaintiff’s counsel. She asks you to draft a Motion to Compel Plaintiff’s Answers to Written Discovery. She tells you to review the applicable Wigmore Supreme Court Rules on discovery and then hands you a document with the applicable rules. It is attached here.

Ms. Brothers tells you to read and include in your motion citation to and a discussion of case law. She says you may use Transamerica Ins. Group v. Lee, 164 Ill. App. 3d 945, 518 N.E.2d 413 (1987), Mueller v. Insurance Ben. Admrs., Inc., 175 Ill. App. 3d 587, 529 N.E.2d 1126 (1988), or such other case you may believe appropriate. She says the Motion is due by Sunday at 1159pm. She also gives you a form for a Motion to Compel that she has from her prior firm which was a Plaintiff’s firm in the upload below.

Please use the pdf file below to help you with this assignment. On pages 14-15 helps break it down on what needs to be done. Please make sure it is done correctly!

watch video and tell me how he uses ethos patho logos

Watch this YouTube clip of Stephen Colbert on late night.

What makes this comedy “work?” Granted, it may not be your cup of tea, subject-wise. But beyond that, what strategies does he use, with his usual/intended audience, to get laughs? The “Analyzing Comedy” blog I provided in course materials will help you a bit here.

Specifically, think about ethos/pathos/logos (see the Paper 1 assignment sheet, the “Backpacks vs. Briefcases” rhetorical analysis chapter of the textbook, and the video in the Week 3 materials if you need help here). How does he appeal to his audience using ethos (credibility), pathos (emotion), and/or logos (logic and reason)?

Make your initial response by Thursday at 11 PM, and respond to at least two classmates’ posts by Sunday at 11 PM.

Literature and Problem Statement

Discussion:
Evaluating Use of Literature and Problem Statement

Researchers use scholarly literature for various purposes in their work, such as, but not limited to, establishing the need for and importance of their study or describing a theory. The problem statement is typically tied to the literature, and for this reason, these two components of research are presented together this week; this connection among research components will be a recurring theme throughout this course.

For this Discussion, you will evaluate the use of literature and problem statements in assigned journal articles in your discipline to understand what it means for a research study to be justified, grounded, and original. You will use the Use of Literature Checklist, the Problem Statement Checklist, and the Litmus Test as guides for your post.

Post a critique of the research study in which you:

  • Evaluate the authors’ use of literature using the Use of Literature Checklist as a guide
  • Evaluate the research problem using the Problem Statement Checklist as a guide
  • Explain what it means for a research study to be justified and grounded in the literature; then, explain what it means for a problem to be original using the Litmus Test as a guide

Be sure to support your Main Issue Post and Response Post with reference to the week’s Learning Resources and other scholarly evidence in APA Style.